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The Cover Letter: Address HOW you meet the minimum requirements


There has been a pattern among Sports Industry candidates noticed over the past months in the development of the Cover Letter (Research comes from the analysis of FREE review services).

Most candidates are using their Cover Letter to repeat information located on the Résumé. This is the wrong approach. Remember what the purpose the Cover Letter serves: to introduce your candidacy to Hiring Managers, forwarding their attention to your Résumé/CV (The 30-second time table). Noticeable repetitive information can be a hindrance to securing the Hiring Manager’s attention, which heavily depends on your content (This is especially true if the information is not related to the employer’s needs).

Always remember that employers are flooded with Résumé/CV submissions (Which is why most are using electronic Applicant Tracking Systems [ATS]).

The Correct Approach in writing a Cover Letter: Address HOW you meet the minimum requirements listed within the job description. Why? This removes your candidacy from the “Unqualified Applicant” submissions.

Steps to help guide your approach:

1st – Study the job description
2nd – Compare the Minimum Requirements to your unique Areas of Expertise
3rd – List employer’s Top Priorities for posting this position (Comes from Step #1)
4th – Address HOW you meet, or are qualified to meet the Top Priorities
5th – Provide examples of related Achievements

Look at this job posting from the San Francisco 49ers organization. Can you tell top priorities or the purpose for listing this position?

Sales & Marketing: Ticket Sales Management
Manager, Ticket Sales & Service – San Francisco 49ers (Santa Clara, CA)

The Manager, Ticket Sales & Service is responsible for managing ticket sales for Candlestick Park, which includes, but is not limited to, the following:

• Supervision over sales staff call campaigns to sell season and group ticket plans
• Strategic development of electronic sales campaigns (e-mail) to support new season ticket and group sales
• Management oversight for customer service matters
• Sales & service records management via Archtics
• Lead generation and data collection
• Personnel management and development, including ongoing training and skills assessment
• Monthly sales contest and commission reporting
• Weekly sales reporting to VP
• Management oversight for weekly ticket sales & service meeting

Primary Responsibilities:
• Supervise daily sales efforts through aggressive outbound phone activity; existing customer referrals; networking events and outside appointments; and, stadium visits
• Monitor daily call activity ensuring volume requirements are being met
• Provide daily reports and activity summaries as outlined by VP
• Provide daily supervisory management of the team’s ticketing database, Archtics, to monitor and organize sales and service activity
• Implement ongoing sales and service training throughout the year, including the use of outside professional services combined with weekly best –practices sessions handled internally
• Play lead-role toward mitigating service-related issues involving season ticket and group accounts
• Establish strong, personal relationships with existing account holders to develop new sales referrals
• Meet all pre-determined activity and sales goals for ticket sales and service
• Identify new lead sources and manage data collection, lead assignment process
• Supervise staffing of sales & service tables during game day and outside events
• Assist VP in the planning and implementation of sales and service business plans and initiatives
• Assist with creative concepts for production of sales and service material/collateral
• Collaborate effectively with all revenue generating departments to achieve organizational sales goals
• Assist with all other sales and service duties, as assigned

Qualifications and Skills:
• 3-5 years of managerial experience involving sales and service with professional sports and entertainment strongly preferred
• The ability to handle multiple projects at one time and provide reports and activity summaries as directed
• Leading by example is a must, including setting the tone for daily activity and accountability toward new ticket sales and customer service
• Experience providing service to season ticket accounts in a management role
• Proven written and presentation skills.
• Extensive experience with the team ticketing database, Archtics.
• Passion for sales, service, and most importantly, leadership
• Strong work ethic and desire to build career in professional sports
• Bilingual a plus

Note: This position was originally posted on the San Francisco 49ers employment site. To ensure that your application is considered for this position, please click here to apply for this job on the San Francisco 49ers employment site.

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Cover Letter(s): Excessive use of the letter “I”


Excessive use of the letter I. -TSR Staff

This statement is the most frequently used when responding to candidate submissions for FREE Résumé and Cover Letter analysis service requests ([email protected]).

The Cover Letter is an important part of the career planning process. This document is the 1st point of contact between the candidate and the employer.

When writing the Cover Letter, document HOW you meet all of the “minimum requirements” listed in the job description. This will remove your candidacy from the “unqualified candidate” submissions.

Next, reduce the number of times you use the letter “I” at the beginning of sentences. Excessive use of the letter I not only displays bad writing skills, but can portray you as self-centered.

You should use the letter I no more than 4 occasions within your Cover Letter, which includes use within sentences. Excessive use of the letter I can also mean a lack of emphasis placed on the NEEDS of the employer by the candidate (Ex. I also……, I believe……, etc….). The goal of your Cover Letter is to tell the employer how you intend to ADD value to the position. Don’t address how the position will help you achieve any personal goals you are seeking in career development.

There is no perfect method to developing a Cover Letter. However, do not reduce you ability to secure an interview by providing a poorly written Cover Letter.

NOTE: Submit your Cover Letter to [email protected] for a free analysis.

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Unqualified Candidate(s): The HR Nightmare


Sports-Industry employment opportunities receive a large amount of inquiries. A safe estimate (including Coach positions) would be 200 + candidate submissions per position.

This presents a dilemma for all Hiring Managers, those who have the burden of sorting through hundreds of resumés looking for the most qualified candidate(s). It would be safe to assume that this is also the reason most Sports-Industry positions are not filled for months after their posting.

To place your candidacy at the top of a HR manager’s interview list, address HOW you meet each of the Job Requirements listed in the employment description within your Cover Letter. You should address this information within the body of the Cover Letter, directly after the opening paragraph.

Listed below are two employment opportunities from the San Diego Padres  (Inside Sales Representative) and ESPN  (Account Services Representative). We highlight the Job Requirements and Required Qualifications sections to illustrate what specific information needs to be addressed in every candidate’s Cover Letter.

San Diego Padres:

JOB REQUIREMENTS: Must meet the following minimum requirements:

• Bachelor’s degree in a business-related field
• Excellent verbal and written communication skills
• Must possess a strong desire to start a career with a team that has ample opportunity for growth
• Must possess a strong commitment to the sports industry, a passion for sales, a strong work ethic, competitiveness, a positive team first attitude, and a thirst to learn
• Must be a self-starter and be comfortable making cold calls
• Proficient computer skills and experience working with MS Office products
• Strong sense of teamwork; able to create and maintain positive relationships within organization with a wide variety of co-workers
• Professional appearance and demeanor
• Ability to multi-task and prioritize
• Consistent, punctual and regular attendance

ESPN:

Required Qualifications

• BA/BS or equivalent work experience

• Related business experience

• Has some sales administration subject matter expertise and some competence in sales program administration and implementation

• Has some understanding of the sales positioning and sales tactics for assigned clients

• Must have strong communication and problem solving skills

• Must be able to multi-task and organize in a fast paced environment.

• Supports one or several sales teams at all levels during the sales and selling cycle and supports assigned accounts on a day-to-day basis after the close of a sale.

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The Resume/CV used as a “Dartboard”


Obviously by providing the writing services, this writing should be considered a sales pitch.

However, the writers at TSR never want a Sports-Industry candidate to be put in a situation where you are called in for an interview for the purpose of being mocked. It does happen and surprisingly very often.

We will continue to advocate to all that you should never submit a Resume/CV or Cover Letter without getting a 2nd or 3rd set of eyes to view and analyze prior to submission. This is done to save candidates from becoming “time puppets” or “lunch-time entertainment” to Hiring Managers.

REAL SCENARIO:

One of our writers, while at a previous employer, had the opportunity to participate on an interview panel. A week prior to the interview date, a co-worker placed the candidates’ Resume on the main counter for all to see. Every grammatical error was highlighted. Special emphasis was placed on the candidates’ undergraduate major (B.S. in English).

Although granted an interview, this person was not selected for employment. This decision came as no surprise given the employer conduct prior to the interview.

This scenario can happen to anyone. Do not take the content of your Resume/CV for granted. You want your candidacy to be taken seriously and not as an employers side show.

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